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2019年11月16日 09:07

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【不】【是】【一】【只】【羊】【,】【而】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【应】【该】【说】【是】【一】【只】【披】【着】【羊】【皮】【的】【狼】【,】【我】【很】【孤】【独】【,】【因】【为】【我】【混】【进】【了】【学】【校】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【校】【里】【是】【根】【本】【不】【需】【要】【狼】【的】【,】【那】【种】【地】【方】【只】【会】【招】【收】【既】【温】【顺】【又】【可】【爱】【,】【既】【积】【极】【又】【向】【上】【的】【小】【羊】【,】【或】【者】【还】【有】【别】【的】【可】【爱】【的】【宠】【物】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【校】【举】【办】【开】【学】【典】【礼】【那】【天】【,】【我】【冒】【冒】【失】【失】【地】【套】【上】【了】【一】【件】【羊】【皮】【,】【正】【在】【学】【校】【外】【散】【步】【,】【不】【幸】【地】【被】【学】【校】【的】【教】【导】【主】【任】【当】【成】【一】【只】【逃】【课】【的】【羊】【学】【生】【。】【我】【被】【捉】【回】【了】【学】【校】【,】【被】【罚】【了】【五】【千】【字】【的】【检】【讨】【。】【我】【拼】【命】【地】【告】【诉】【他】【们】【,】【我】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【可】【是】【教】【导】【主】【任】【摇】【了】【摇】【头】【,】【叹】【口】【气】【说】【:】【“】【这】【真】【是】【只】【充】【满】【幻】【想】【的】【羊】【,】【羊】【就】【是】【羊】【,】【不】【好】【好】【学】【习】【,】【整】【天】【幻】【想】【变】【成】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【一】【看】【就】【知】【道】【是】【被】【网】【络】【游】【戏】【深】【深】【毒】【害】【了】【!】【”】【我】【拼】【命】【地】【争】【辩】【,】【可】【是】【却】【一】【点】【也】【不】【起】【作】【用】【,】【因】【为】【学】【校】【里】【没】【有】【言】【论】【自】【由】【!】【所】【有】【的】【羊】【老】【师】【一】【致】【认】【为】【我】【是】【只】【冥】【顽】【不】【化】【的】【差】【生】【羊】【,】【学】【校】【对】【我】【的】【处】【罚】【就】【是】【—】【—】【让】【我】【进】【行】【为】【期】【五】【天】【的】【魔】【鬼】【训】【练】【。】【我】【成】【功】【地】【变】【成】【了】【一】【只】【温】【顺】【的】【小】【羊】【,】【我】【对】【老】【师】【的】【话】【言】【听】【计】【从】【。】【羊】【们】【都】【说】【:】【“】【学】【校】【的】【命】【令】【就】【是】【圣】【旨】【,】【违】【者】【,】【严】【惩】【不】【贷】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【我】【拥】【有】【了】【可】【爱】【温】【顺】【的】【外】【表】【,】【可】【我】【的】【骨】【子】【里】【却】【仍】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【。】【我】【有】【孤】【僻】【的】【个】【性】【,】【我】【的】【生】【活】【习】【惯】【与】【周】【围】【所】【有】【的】【羊】【格】【格】【不】【入】【。】【在】【狼】【的】【世】【界】【中】【很】【正】【常】【的】【行】【为】【,】【在】【羊】【同】【学】【的】【眼】【中】【却】【是】【无】【比】【奇】【特】【。】【羊】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【评】【价】【是】【:】【这】【是】【一】【只】【很】【内】【向】【的】【羊】【,】【一】【点】【也】【不】【合】【群】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【我】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【可】【是】【我】【却】【不】【得】【不】【继】【续】【伪】【装】【,】【我】【是】【一】【只】【装】【在】【被】【各】【种】【校】【规】【校】【纪】【限】【制】【的】【套】【子】【里】【的】【狼】【,】【我】【只】【能】【隐】【藏】【起】【自】【己】【的】【个】【性】【。】【我】【不】【得】【不】【隐】【藏】【起】【我】【修】【长】【的】【大】【尾】【巴】【和】【尖】【锐】【的】【牙】【齿】【;】【我】【不】【得】【不】【学】【着】【吃】【没】【有】【味】【道】【的】【令】【人】【倒】【胃】【口】【的】【青】【草】【!】【在】【校】【园】【里】【没】【有】【羊】【了】【解】【我】【,】【没】【有】【羊】【知】【道】【我】【想】【的】【是】【什】【么】【,】【没】【有】【羊】【知】【道】【我】【需】【要】【什】【么】【。】【在】【羊】【群】【的】【背】【影】【后】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【了】【寂】【寞】【陪】【伴】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【!】【但】【是】【却】【不】【是】【曾】【经】【威】【风】【凛】【凛】【的】【狼】【,】【而】【是】【一】【只】【可】【怜】【的】【、】【充】【满】【着】【秋】【雨】【一】【般】【悲】【哀】【的】【狼】【!】【夜】【凉】【如】【水】【,】【我】【独】【自】【坐】【在】【池】【塘】【边】【,】【静】【静】【地】【脱】【下】【羊】【皮】【。】【阴】【森】【森】【的】【月】【光】【倾】【泻】【下】【来】【,】【照】【在】【我】【暗】【淡】【无】【光】【的】【皮】【毛】【上】【,】【我】【只】【能】【在】【心】【底】【轻】【轻】【地】【叹】【息】【。】【作】【为】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【现】【在】【却】【连】【嚎】【叫】【都】【成】【为】【了】【一】【种】【奢】【望】【,】【因】【为】【,】【校】【规】【第】【1】【2】【9】【8】【条】【明】【确】【规】【定】【:】【校】【园】【内】【不】【准】【大】【声】【喧】【哗】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【有】【一】【天】【,】【我】【感】【到】【了】【无】【比】【的】【绝】【望】【。】【我】【想】【我】【一】【定】【是】【疯】【了】【,】【我】【站】【在】【明】【亮】【得】【刺】【眼】【的】【阳】【光】【下】【,】【在】【所】【有】【羊】【的】【面】【前】【脱】【下】【了】【那】【张】【束】【缚】【我】【很】【久】【的】【羊】【皮】【。】【学】【校】【校】【规】【第】【2】【3】【0】【8】【9】【条】【规】【定】【:】【狼】【与】【人】【不】【得】【进】【入】【校】【园】【。】【我】【以】【为】【自】【己】【终】【于】【可】【以】【离】【开】【这】【个】【使】【狼】【窒】【息】【的】【学】【校】【了】【。】【沸】【腾】【的】【校】【园】【一】【下】【子】【变】【得】【鸦】【雀】【无】【声】【。】【一】【阵】【静】【默】【之】【后】【,】【羊】【们】【都】【说】【:】【“】【这】【是】【一】【只】【狗】【,】【这】【一】【定】【是】【一】【只】【狗】【,】【有】【9】【9】【.】【9】【9】【%】【的】【可】【能】【性】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【狗】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【依】【旧】【只】【能】【待】【在】【如】【同】【监】【狱】【一】【般】【的】【校】【园】【里】【。】【残】【阳】【如】【血】【,】【我】【望】【着】【远】【处】【的】【夕】【阳】【,】【心】【中】【不】【停】【地】【滴】【血】【,】【目】【光】【呆】【滞】【。】【也】【许】【我】【不】【再】【是】【一】【只】【狼】【,】【也】【不】【是】【羊】【,】【真】【的】【更】【像】【是】【一】【只】【狗】【,】【我】【的】【血】【液】【在】【一】【点】【点】【凝】【固】【,】【心】【跳】【一】【点】【点】【变】【慢】【,】【也】【许】【我】【快】【要】【死】【掉】【了】【,】【我】【的】【视】【线】【一】【点】【点】【地】【开】【始】【模】【糊】【,】【又】【一】【点】【点】【地】【清】【晰】【,】【一】【望】【无】【际】【的】【草】【原】【上】【,】【一】【股】【跳】【跃】【的】【洪】【流】【横】【扫】【草】【原】【,】【我】【的】【同】【伴】【们】【正】【疯】【狂】【地】【张】【扬】【自】【己】【的】【个】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【破】【晓】【时】【,】【我】【纵】【身】【一】【跃】【,】【翻】【出】【了】【学】【校】【的】【围】【墙】【。】【不】【用】【再】【担】【心】【会】【违】【反】【哪】【一】【条】【校】【规】【了】【,】【我】【朝】【着】【草】【原】【的】【方】【向】【奔】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【想】【象】【大】【胆】【奇】【特】【的】【文】【章】【,】【作】【者】【以】【第】【一】【人】【称】【的】【手】【法】【,】【以】【狼】【的】【口】【吻】【讲】【述】【了】【自】【己】【在】【羊】【群】【中】【的】【不】【幸】【遭】【遇】【,】【这】【里】【的】【一】【切】【对】【自】【己】【来】【说】【都】【是】【一】【种】【摧】【残】【。】【在】【无】【法】【承】【受】【这】【些】【的】【时】【候】【,】【它】【突】【然】【冲】【出】【了】【学】【校】【,】【重】【新】【找】【回】【了】【自】【己】【的】【自】【由】【。】【同】【时】【说】【明】【了】【一】【个】【深】【刻】【的】【道】【理】【,】【那】【就】【是】【一】【定】【要】【做】【适】【合】【自】【己】【身】【份】【的】【事】【情】【,】【否】【则】【只】【能】【自】【找】【苦】【吃】【。】【语】【言】【富】【有】【表】【现】【力】【,】【使】【用】【了】【比】【喻】【和】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【增】【加】【了】【文】【章】【的】【生】【动】【性】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【卫】【杰】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【 】【技】【巧】【点】【拨】【:】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【采】【用】【陌】【生】【化】【技】【法】【中】【的】【变】【形】【手】【段】【,】【将】【人】【畸】【变】【为】【动】【物】【,】【以】【影】【射】【当】【前】【的】【教】【育】【现】【状】【,】【可】【谓】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【这】【种】【写】【法】【不】【重】【形】【似】【而】【重】【神】【似】【,】【以】【传】【神】【入】【化】【为】【目】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【风】【送】【来】【家】【的】【气】【息】【,】【秋】【叶】【带】【来】【家】【的】【思】【念】【。】【亲】【情】【如】【雨】【露】【默】【默】【滋】【润】【着】【我】【的】【心】【田】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【烦】【不】【烦】【,】【别】【总】【是】【问】【个】【没】【完】【!】【”】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【进】【了】【屋】【,】【“】【嘭】【”】【地】【一】【声】【把】【母】【亲】【拒】【之】【门】【外】【,】【这】【响】【声】【久】【久】【在】【我】【耳】【边】【环】【绕】【,】【因】【为】【考】【试】【的】【失】【败】【,】【我】【把】【积】【攒】【了】【许】【久】【的】【愤】【怒】【、】【伤】【心】【毫】【不】【“】【吝】【啬】【”】【地】【发】【泄】【在】【母】【亲】【身】【上】【。】【母】【亲】【在】【门】【外】【一】【直】【问】【我】【是】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【我】【不】【耐】【烦】【地】【喊】【着】【:】【“】【让】【我】【静】【一】【静】【!】【”】【本】【以】【为】【母】【亲】【会】【对】【我】【的】【行】【为】【大】【发】【脾】【气】【,】【但】【她】【并】【没】【有】【。】【可】【为】【了】【不】【让】【她】【再】【烦】【我】【,】【对】【着】【门】【扔】【了】【一】【句】【:】【“】【考】【试】【没】【考】【好】【,】【行】【了】【吧】【?】【”】【接】【下】【来】【是】【母】【亲】【的】【沉】【默】【,】【我】【也】【觉】【得】【四】【周】【变】【得】【很】【静】【。】【过】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【我】【偷】【偷】【打】【开】【门】【,】【发】【现】【母】【亲】【已】【经】【走】【了】【,】【我】【更】【加】【生】【气】【了】【。】【心】【想】【:】【考】【试】【没】【考】【好】【就】【不】【理】【我】【了】【?】【其】【实】【,】【我】【还】【是】【不】【希】【望】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【的】【。】【过】【了】【好】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【我】【听】【见】【敲】【门】【声】【,】【准】【是】【妈】【妈】【回】【来】【了】【,】【我】【打】【开】【门】【,】【看】【见】【妈】【妈】【捧】【着】【一】【撂】【参】【考】【书】【。】【我】【愣】【了】【。】【亲】【情】【又】【像】【雨】【露】【滋】【润】【着】【我】【的】【心】【田】【,】【我】【一】【下】【子】【扑】【到】【妈】【妈】【的】【怀】【里】【哭】【了】【,】【哭】【得】【是】【那】【么】【愧】【疚】【,】【那】【么】【痛】【快】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【情】【是】【秋】【日】【中】【随】【风】【飘】【荡】【的】【落】【叶】【,】【从】【遥】【远】【的】【地】【方】【飘】【到】【我】【面】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【小】【学】【四】【年】【级】【时】【,】【父】【母】【外】【出】【打】【工】【,】【我】【和】【爷】【爷】【奶】【奶】【住】【在】【一】【起】【。】【父】【母】【为】【了】【不】【让】【我】【难】【过】【,】【骗】【我】【说】【他】【们】【过】【一】【段】【时】【间】【后】【就】【回】【来】【。】【那】【是】【深】【秋】【的】【夜】【晚】【,】【很】【静】【,】【 】【很】【静】【,】【静】【得】【听】【得】【见】【树】【叶】【飘】【落】【的】【声】【音】【,】【我】【无】【意】【间】【听】【到】【了】【妈】【妈】【和】【奶】【奶】【的】【电】【话】【,】【奶】【奶】【表】【情】【有】【些】【不】【一】【样】【,】【好】【像】【怕】【我】【听】【到】【什】【么】【似】【的】【,】【我】【当】【时】【装】【作】【什】【么】【都】【不】【知】【道】【,】【可】【那】【不】【争】【气】【的】【眼】【泪】【还】【是】【流】【了】【出】【来】【,】【我】【跑】【回】【卧】【室】【失】【声】【痛】【哭】【。】【奶】【奶】【不】【会】【安】【慰】【人】【,】【她】【只】【是】【默】【默】【地】【给】【我】【送】【上】【了】【一】【杯】【咖】【啡】【,】【我】【端】【着】【这】【咖】【啡】【慢】【慢】【地】【喝】【了】【几】【口】【,】【这】【亲】【情】【之】【爱】【多】【像】【咖】【啡】【啊】【,】【只】【有】【细】【细】【品】【味】【才】【能】【体】【会】【到】【它】【的】【甜】【。】【在】【家】【人】【一】【句】【亲】【切】【的】【问】【候】【中】【,】【一】【声】【嘘】【寒】【问】【暖】【的】【关】【怀】【中】【,】【一】【些】【苦】【口】【婆】【心】【的】【唠】【叨】【中】【,】【亲】【情】【以】【无】【声】【的】【爱】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【心】【房】【。】【以】【后】【的】【几】【个】【月】【,】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【时】【常】【打】【电】【话】【过】【来】【问】【寒】【问】【暖】【。】【深】【秋】【天】【虽】【寒】【,】【但】【亲】【情】【却】【没】【有】【减】【少】【,】【依】【旧】【是】【那】【么】【温】【暖】【,】【父】【母】【虽】【然】【远】【在】【他】【乡】【,】【但】【亲】【情】【把】【我】【们】【的】【心】【紧】【紧】【连】【在】【了】【一】【起】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【情】【给】【我】【关】【怀】【,】【给】【我】【安】【慰】【,】【给】【我】【温】【暖】【,】【给】【我】【幸】【福】【,】【世】【界】【上】【再】【没】【有】【比】【亲】【情】【更】【加】【珍】【贵】【的】【东】【西】【了】【。】【亲】【情】【,】【我】【会】【细】【细】【品】【味】【它】【的】【甘】【甜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【全】【文】【语】【言】【自】【然】【贴】【切】【,】【行】【文】【流】【畅】【,】【把】【一】【个】【开】【始】【不】【理】【解】【父】【母】【的】【女】【孩】【的】【心】【态】【描】【写】【得】【入】【木】【三】【分】【,】【细】【腻】【生】【动】【,】【思】【路】【清】【晰】【,】【很】【能】【表】【现】【小】【作】【者】【的】【写】【作】【功】【底】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【英】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】母狗狗的名字【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【当】【自】【认】【为】【是】【地】【球】【上】【最】【后】【一】【个】【人】【的】【迪】【达】【斯】【正】【坐】【在】【房】【内】【惊】【恐】【不】【安】【时】【,】【门】【外】【突】【然】【响】【起】【了】【敲】【门】【声】【。】【迪】【达】【斯】【马】【上】【警】【觉】【起】【来】【,】【竖】【起】【耳】【朵】【,】【眼】【中】【闪】【过】【一】【丝】【惊】【疑】【:】【到】【底】【是】【哪】【一】【方】【胜】【了】【?】【敲】【门】【者】【或】【许】【是】【自】【己】【人】【吧】【?】【谁】【会】【知】【道】【我】【在】【这】【儿】【呢】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【想】【知】【道】【这】【个】【迪】【达】【斯】【的】【来】【历】【吗】【?】【就】【是】【他】【,】【这】【个】【地】【球】【人】【的】【叛】【徒】【,】【乘】【坐】【U】【F】【O】【来】【到】【地】【球】【,】【配】【合】【A】【星】【球】【人】【用】【激】【光】【型】【超】【能】【量】【炮】【弹】【把】【地】【球】【炸】【得】【伤】【痕】【累】【累】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迪】【达】【斯】【本】【是】【一】【个】【地】【球】【人】【,】【因】【贩】【卖】【毒】【品】【而】【入】【狱】【,】【被】【判】【处】【死】【刑】【。】【执】【刑】【那】【天】【,】【本】【是】【晴】【空】【万】【里】【。】【但】【枪】【响】【之】【时】【,】【一】【道】【闪】【电】【划】【过】【天】【空】【,】【刺】【得】【人】【们】【眼】【睛】【都】【睁】【不】【开】【。】【等】【闪】【电】【过】【后】【,】【迪】【达】【斯】【已】【全】【无】【踪】【影】【。】【由】【于】【现】【场】【没】【有】【留】【下】【什】【么】【线】【索】【,】【所】【以】【迪】【达】【斯】【一】【案】【以】【罪】【犯】【失】【踪】【而】【告】【终】【。】【但】【这】【个】【悬】【案】【在】【十】【年】【后】【,】【终】【于】【真】【相】【大】【白】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【事】【情】【是】【这】【样】【的】【,】【迪】【达】【斯】【悬】【案】【作】【为】【社】【会】【的】【一】【个】【插】【曲】【,】【已】【随】【着】【时】【光】【流】【逝】【而】【被】【人】【们】【所】【淡】【忘】【。】【十】【年】【后】【,】【已】【没】【有】【人】【再】【为】【这】【个】【悬】【案】【寻】【找】【答】【案】【。】【这】【一】【天】【,】【在】【美】【国】【的】【一】【个】【天】【文】【观】【测】【台】【,】【有】【一】【个】【科】【学】【家】【正】【在】【观】【测】【银】【河】【系】【中】【最】【新】【发】【现】【的】【鱼】【星】【,】【突】【然】【他】【惊】【叫】【道】【:】【“】【看】【!】【—】【—】【飞】【碟】【!】【”】【等】【人】【们】【都】【从】【屋】【中】【跑】【出】【来】【,】【想】【一】【睹】【外】【星】【人】【风】【采】【时】【,】【已】【经】【晚】【了】【,】【他】【们】【所】【在】【的】【城】【市】【就】【在】【瞬】【间】【化】【为】【废】【墟】【。】【接】【着】【整】【个】【地】【球】【都】【遭】【到】【袭】【击】【,】【原】【先】【地】【球】【上】【防】【止】【外】【星】【人】【来】【犯】【的】【设】【施】【,】【现】【在】【起】【不】【了】【任】【何】【作】【用】【。】【美】【丽】【的】【地】【球】【,】【人】【类】【的】【家】【园】【,】【在】【短】【时】【间】【内】【成】【了】【一】【个】【疮】【疤】【遍】【体】【的】【星】【球】【,】【整】【个】【地】【球】【一】【片】【荒】【凉】【,】【全】【无】【生】【命】【气】【息】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【炸】【毁】【地】【球】【最】【后】【一】【座】【城】【市】【之】【后】【,】【地】【球】【上】【彻】【底】【地】【安】【静】【下】【来】【。】【这】【时】【,】【一】【阵】【狂】【笑】【声】【传】【来】【:】【“】【哈】【哈】【…】【…】【我】【成】【功】【了】【,】【地】【球】【是】【我】【的】【了】【,】【我】【是】【地】【球】【上】【唯】【一】【的】【人】【了】【,】【我】【可】【以】【主】【宰】【一】【切】【了】【!】【谁】【说】【邪】【不】【压】【正】【?】【我】【就】【是】【邪】【恶】【的】【代】【表】【,】【地】【球】【都】【由】【我】【说】【了】【算】【,】【哈】【哈】【…】【…】【”】【从】【此】【邪】【恶】【主】【宰】【了】【地】【球】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【,】【迪】【达】【斯】【十】【年】【前】【在】【被】【行】【刑】【之】【际】【,】【被】【来】【地】【球】【侦】【察】【的】【A】【星】【球】【人】【救】【下】【。】【A】【星】【球】【人】【满】【为】【患】【,】【想】【找】【一】【个】【星】【球】【作】【为】【殖】【民】【地】【。】【经】【过】【长】【期】【考】【察】【研】【究】【,】【他】【们】【准】【备】【攻】【打】【地】【球】【,】【于】【是】【被】【他】【们】【救】【下】【的】【迪】【达】【斯】【与】【他】【们】【狼】【狈】【为】【奸】【,】【经】【过】【十】【年】【准】【备】【,】【终】【于】【击】【毁】【了】【地】【球】【。】【A】【星】【球】【人】【大】【量】【地】【向】【地】【球】【移】【民】【,】【地】【球】【成】【了】【A】【星】【人】【的】【世】【界】【,】【迪】【达】【斯】【成】【了】【地】【球】【联】【合】【国】【的】【国】【王】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【这】【个】【迪】【达】【斯】【在】【获】【悉】【太】【空】【特】【种】【部】【队】【突】【袭】【地】【球】【的】【情】【报】【后】【,】【便】【逃】【离】【了】【歌】【舞】【升】【平】【的】【皇】【宫】【,】【独】【自】【躲】【进】【密】【室】【。】【可】【他】【怎】【么】【也】【没】【料】【到】【A】【星】【球】【人】【会】【败】【得】【那】【么】【快】【。】【这】【时】【,】【门】【外】【响】【起】【了】【洪】【亮】【的】【警】【告】【声】【:】【“】【迪】【达】【斯】【,】【你】【快】【投】【降】【吧】【,】【你】【已】【无】【路】【可】【逃】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迪】【达】【斯】【最】【怕】【的】【事】【还】【是】【发】【生】【了】【。】【原】【来】【,】【地】【球】【早】【已】【加】【入】【了】【太】【空】【联】【盟】【,】【可】【几】【天】【来】【地】【球】【中】【断】【了】【联】【系】【信】【号】【,】【这】【就】【引】【起】【了】【太】【空】【联】【盟】【的】【怀】【疑】【,】【于】【是】【太】【空】【警】【察】【来】【地】【球】【视】【察】【,】【很】【快】【获】【悉】【了】【地】【球】【人】【所】【遭】【受】【的】【灾】【难】【。】【太】【空】【特】【种】【部】【队】【以】【迅】【雷】【不】【及】【掩】【耳】【之】【势】【,】【出】【奇】【制】【胜】【地】【摧】【毁】【了】【A】【星】【球】【绝】【大】【部】【分】【军】【事】【设】【施】【,】【遣】【返】【了】【A】【星】【球】【人】【,】【并】【一】【鼓】【作】【气】【地】【打】【到】【迪】【达】【斯】【的】【密】【室】【。】【迪】【达】【斯】【知】【道】【无】【路】【可】【逃】【,】【只】【得】【投】【降】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【迪】【达】【斯】【绝】【不】【是】【最】【后】【一】【个】【地】【球】【人】【。】【太】【空】【警】【察】【又】【从】【森】【林】【和】【地】【下】【堡】【垒】【中】【找】【到】【了】【许】【多】【地】【球】【人】【,】【他】【们】【在】【太】【空】【联】【盟】【的】【帮】【助】【下】【,】【重】【新】【建】【设】【地】【球】【,】【地】【球】【又】【迎】【来】【了】【新】【的】【光】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【以】【科】【幻】【手】【法】【进】【行】【写】【作】【,】【并】【巧】【用】【倒】【叙】【法】【,】【层】【层】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【又】【一】【层】【一】【层】【剥】【开】【来】【,】【使】【情】【节】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【,】【环】【环】【相】【扣】【。】【文】【章】【的】【构】【思】【很】【新】【奇】【,】【语】【言】【表】【达】【也】【很】【生】【动】【,】【看】【来】【小】【作】【者】【是】【下】【了】【工】【夫】【的】【。】【如】【果】【文】【章】【在】【最】【后】【能】【和】【当】【今】【的】【科】【技】【发】【展】【以】【及】【当】【今】【的】【环】【保】【联】【系】【起】【来】【,】【那】【就】【很】【有】【现】【实】【意】【义】【了】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【孟】【宪】【法】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【小】【时】【候】【我】【不】【懂】【事】【,】【不】【能】【理】【解】【父】【母】【的】【一】【片】【苦】【心】【,】【但】【是】【半】【年】【前】【我】【开】【始】【关】【注】【了】【母】【亲】【的】【早】【饭】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】母狗狗的名字【<】【p】【>】【胖】【的】【人】【有】【这】【么】【多】【优】【点】【,】【甩】【了】【瘦】【的】【人】【好】【几】【里】【呢】【!】【希】【望】【妈】【妈】【能】【理】【解】【我】【。】【所】【以】【,】【请】【不】【要】【怪】【我】【发】【胖】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

母狗狗的名字:中东最大军演开幕

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【仿】【词】【练】【句】【,】【过】【好】【语】【言】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【要】【用】【词】【造】【句】【灵】【活】【、】【准】【确】【,】【语】【句】【通】【顺】【,】【表】【意】【清】【楚】【明】【白】【,】【要】【让】【人】【家】【一】【读】【起】【来】【就】【说】【,】【嗨】【,】【这】【个】【同】【学】【的】【用】【词】【造】【句】【还】【真】【不】【赖】【啦】【,】【顺】【顺】【溜】【溜】【的】【,】【既】【读】【来】【上】【口】【,】【又】【具】【有】【表】【现】【力】【。】【可】【是】【,】【事】【实】【上】【并】【非】【如】【此】【,】【我】【们】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【语】【言】【并】【没】【有】【真】【正】【过】【关】【,】【要】【么】【句】【子】【不】【通】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【要】【么】【是】【虽】【然】【通】【顺】【但】【又】【生】【硬】【、】【枯】【燥】【。】【请】【比】【较】【阅】【读】【下】【列】【两】【个】【语】【段】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【悄】【悄】【地】【出】【现】【,】【又】【悄】【悄】【地】【隐】【去】【。】【她】【在】【我】【熟】【睡】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【张】【扬】【的】【躯】【体】【以】【温】【暖】【;】【她】【在】【我】【惆】【怅】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【迷】【惘】【的】【心】【灵】【以】【慰】【藉】【;】【她】【在】【我】【快】【乐】【时】【默】【默】【地】【与】【我】【分】【享】【;】【她】【在】【我】【悲】【伤】【时】【执】【著】【地】【选】【择】【与】【我】【同】【行】【。】【她】【的】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【鞭】【笞】【着】【我】【行】【动】【的】【张】【狂】【,】【抚】【慰】【着】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【创】【伤】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【空】【气】【漫】【天】【,】【风】【沙】【干】【燥】【的】【下】【午】【,】【来】【你】【到】【王】【府】【井】【步】【行】【街】【,】【古】【希】【奇】【怪】【的】【人】【们】【你】【身】【边】【走】【过】【,】【有】【道】【士】【、】【有】【和】【尚】【、】【有】【老】【外】【、】【有】【H】【I】【P】【青】【年】【也】【有】【板】【儿】【爷】【,】【他】【们】【走】【在】【街】【上】【,】【走】【在】【寂】【静】【,】【而】【阴】【一】【会】【排】【成】【一】【个】【字】【,】【一】【会】【排】【成】【人】【个】【字】【,】【内】【酷】【到】【家】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【段】【文】【字】【是】【一】【篇】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【母】【爱】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【生】【动】【优】【美】【的】【遣】【词】【造】【句】【,】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【妙】【用】【,】【极】【大】【地】【显】【示】【出】【母】【爱】【的】【张】【力】【、】【母】【爱】【的】【博】【大】【和】【温】【馨】【。】【第】【二】【段】【文】【字】【是】【2】【0】【0】【6】【年】【中】【考】【北】【京】【卷】【零】【分】【作】【文】【《】【北】【京】【的】【符】【号】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【你】【读】【了】【其】【语】【句】【简】【直】【不】【知】【其】【所】【云】【,】【随】【便】【乱】【用】【词】【语】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【真】【是】【让】【人】【不】【忍】【卒】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【判】【断】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【优】【劣】【,】【首】【先】【就】【能】【从】【你】【读】【的】【语】【言】【句】【子】【上】【感】【觉】【出】【来】【,】【是】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【往】【往】【是】【非】【常】【准】【确】【的】【,】【一】【读】【就】【知】【道】【你】【的】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【是】【可】【以】【习】【得】【的】【,】【这】【要】【求】【我】【们】【平】【时】【要】【坚】【持】【长】【期】【的】【、】【大】【量】【的】【阅】【读】【训】【练】【。】【只】【有】【平】【时】【大】【量】【地】【读】【人】【家】【的】【好】【文】【章】【,】【学】【习】【其】【中】【的】【优】【美】【的】【词】【句】【、】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【有】【意】【去】【模】【仿】【、】【训】【练】【,】【方】【能】【有】【所】【成】【效】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【提】【纲】【挈】【领】【,】【过】【好】【立】【意】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【审】【题】【立】【意】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【最】【重】【要】【的】【一】【步】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【不】【审】【题】【,】【也】【不】【立】【意】【,】【喜】【欢】【想】【一】【句】【写】【一】【句】【,】【就】【像】【挤】【牙】【膏】【似】【的】【,】【这】【是】【写】【不】【好】【作】【文】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【必】【须】【先】【花】【点】【时】【间】【去】【审】【题】【,】【去】【列】【提】【纲】【,】【去】【立】【意】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【磨】【刀】【不】【误】【砍】【柴】【工】【。】【但】【一】【旦】【这】【个】【步】【骤】【完】【成】【了】【,】【作】【文】【就】【能】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【,】【不】【但】【能】【确】【保】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【,】【而】【且】【还】【有】【可】【能】【更】【节】【省】【时】【间】【。】【如】【有】【篇】【《】【化】【蝶】【飞】【》】【的】【佳】【作】【是】【这】【样】【立】【意】【和】【列】【提】【纲】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【旨】【:】【在】【危】【机】【四】【伏】【中】【安】【于】【现】【状】【,】【那】【必】【定】【是】【死】【亡】【;】【只】【有】【不】【断】【地】【挑】【战】【危】【机】【,】【才】【能】【走】【向】【光】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【纲】【:】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【化】【蝶】【飞】【翔】【的】【过】【程】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【着】【重】【描】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【蜕】【化】【经】【过】【,】【蚕】【茧】【在】【蜕】【化】【过】【程】【中】【的】【心】【理】【等】【等】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【采】【用】【生】【动】【的】【描】【摹】【,】【细】【腻】【的】【刻】【画】【,】【来】【展】【现】【蚕】【茧】【的】【战】【胜】【黑】【暗】【的】【勇】【气】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【使】【之】【能】【够】【充】【分】【地】【传】【达】【出】【上】【述】【清】【晰】【的】【主】【题】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【追】【求】【委】【婉】【含】【蓄】【,】【又】【必】【须】【中】【心】【明】【确】【,】【主】【旨】【显】【豁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【中】【考】【贵】【州】【遵】【义】【一】【考】【生】【写】【的】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【可】【见】【,】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【审】【题】【、】【立】【意】【这】【一】【关】【,】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【过】【好】【拟】【题】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【考】【试】【作】【文】【,】【大】【多】【是】【材】【料】【作】【文】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【等】【,】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【拟】【题】【的】【。】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【,】【首】【先】【就】【会】【在】【拟】【题】【上】【体】【现】【出】【来】【。】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【内】【容】【的】【作】【文】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【好】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【差】【,】【最】【后】【得】【分】【会】【有】【很】【大】【的】【差】【距】【,】【这】【一】【点】【在】【本】【人】【的】【多】【次】【中】【考】【阅】【卷】【经】【历】【中】【得】【到】【了】【证】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【写】【“】【世】【间】【有】【很】【多】【规】【矩】【,】【有】【很】【多】【条】【条】【框】【框】【,】【有】【很】【多】【‘】【绳】【索】【’】【在】【束】【缚】【着】【人】【们】【,】【特】【别】【是】【束】【缚】【着】【学】【生】【”】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【我】【被】【束】【缚】【着】【》】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【半】【个】【我】【》】【,】【结】【果】【两】【文】【得】【分】【相】【差】【1】【5】【分】【之】【多】【。】【很】【明】【显】【,】【前】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【非】【常】【一】【般】【,】【而】【后】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【则】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【。】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【因】【为】【作】【者】【形】【象】【地】【揭】【示】【出】【规】【矩】【呀】【,】【条】【条】【框】【框】【呀】【,】【简】【直】【把】【有】【个】【性】【的】【“】【长】【方】【形】【”】【的】【“】【我】【”】【,】【硬】【给】【活】【生】【生】【地】【磨】【成】【了】【“】【圆】【”】【。】【成】【“】【圆】【”】【后】【的】【“】【我】【”】【不】【是】【完】【整】【的】【“】【我】【”】【了】【,】【而】【是】【只】【有】【“】【半】【个】【我】【”】【了】【。】【文】【章】【写】【来】【确】【实】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【、】【行】【文】【风】【趣】【而】【又】【启】【人】【遐】【思】【。】【再】【加】【上】【板】【块】【式】【的】【结】【构】【,】【更】【使】【得】【文】【章】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【、】【论】【说】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【才】【能】【拟】【好】【题】【呢】【?】【方】【法】【很】【多】【,】【如】【采】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【借】【用】【、】【化】【用】【、】【引】【用】【、】【设】【问】【、】【反】【问】【、】【改】【造】【等】【等】【,】【都】【是】【不】【错】【的】【方】【法】【。】【但】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【无】【论】【采】【用】【什】【么】【方】【法】【拟】【题】【,】【都】【应】【该】【是】【立】【意】【在】【先】【,】【拟】【题】【在】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【,】【过】【好】【素】【材】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【作】【文】【是】【素】【材】【堆】【砌】【而】【成】【的】【,】【这】【话】【虽】【不】【完】【全】【对】【,】【但】【还】【是】【有】【一】【定】【道】【理】【的】【,】【因】【为】【作】【文】【的】【确】【是】【离】【不】【开】【素】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【作】【文】【不】【是】【堆】【砌】【素】【材】【,】【而】【是】【择】【取】【使】【用】【素】【材】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【式】【的】【使】【用】【素】【材】【。】【平】【时】【我】【们】【要】【求】【积】【累】【大】【量】【的】【素】【材】【,】【但】【真】【正】【写】【入】【作】【文】【的】【素】【材】【(】【题】【材】【)】【,】【也】【就】【那】【么】【一】【两】【则】【而】【已】【。】【为】【了】【能】【够】【用】【上】【这】【一】【两】【则】【的】【素】【材】【,】【你】【平】【时】【就】【必】【须】【大】【量】【地】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【,】【否】【则】【,】【到】【作】【文】【时】【你】【就】【很】【难】【择】【取】【到】【恰】【当】【的】【素】【材】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【有】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【这】【也】【是】【一】【种】【承】【诺】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【福】【建】【福】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【写】【重】【获】【原】【来】【的】【生】【活】【,】【不】【能】【止】【于】【口】【头】【、】【口】【号】【,】【而】【应】【该】【落】【实】【到】【具】【体】【实】【在】【的】【行】【动】【上】【,】【这】【才】【是】【一】【种】【真】【正】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【文】【章】【的】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【十】【分】【鲜】【明】【。】【为】【了】【阐】【述】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【作】【者】【只】【择】【取】【了】【一】【个】【新】【颖】【素】【材】【:】【“】【5】【·】【1】【2】【”】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【中】【,】【背】【亡】【妻】【的】【男】【子】【吴】【家】【芳】【。】【并】【具】【体】【围】【绕】【吴】【家】【芳】【再】【婚】【的】【行】【为】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【说】【来】【有】【理】【有】【据】【,】【令】【人】【信】【服】【。】【这】【个】【素】【材】【,】【看】【似】【随】【意】【,】【但】【一】【定】【是】【作】【者】【在】【大】【量】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【的】【素】【材】【中】【择】【取】【而】【来】【的】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【的】【结】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【过】【好】【感】【情】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【无】【论】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【、】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【还】【是】【平】【时】【作】【文】【,】【都】【特】【别】【看】【重】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【写】【浪】【漫】【式】【的】【,】【写】【幻】【想】【、】【想】【象】【式】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【不】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【只】【需】【要】【天】【马】【行】【空】【即】【可】【,】【这】【绝】【对】【是】【错】【误】【的】【认】【识】【。】【不】【管】【写】【什】【么】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【都】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【是】【奇】【幻】【、】【浪】【漫】【的】【吧】【,】【但】【你】【可】【曾】【知】【道】【,】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【表】【达】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【是】【极】【其】【真】【挚】【的】【:】【生】【活】【于】【社】【会】【底】【层】【的】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【受】【了】【辱】【,】【无】【法】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【,】【于】【是】【作】【者】【就】【替】【劳】【苦】【大】【众】【想】【象】【、】【设】【计】【出】【了】【一】【个】【无】【所】【不】【能】【的】【孙】【悟】【空】【来】【为】【广】【大】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【这】【种】【情】【愫】【是】【多】【么】【的】【真】【挚】【而】【朴】【素】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【清】【楚】【,】【并】【不】【是】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【真】【人】【真】【事】【,】【才】【能】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【无】【论】【写】【什】【么】【,】【都】【必】【须】【符】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【符】【合】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【符】【合】【社】【会】【、】【自】【然】【的】【发】【展】【规】【律】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【认】【识】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【…】【…】【这】【才】【叫】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【达】【到】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【你】【就】【必】【须】【观】【察】【生】【活】【、】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【用】【心】【思】【考】【。】【在】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【现】【象】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【涂】【抹】【上】【你】【自】【己】【的】【感】【情】【色】【彩】【,】【这】【才】【能】【真】【正】【过】【好】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【过】【好】【点】【题】【升】【华】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【要】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【,】【就】【像】【一】【个】【圆】【,】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【必】【须】【圆】【合】【,】【而】【不】【能】【像】【一】【条】【直】【线】【,】【产】【生】【两】【个】【相】【反】【方】【向】【上】【的】【端】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【刻】【意】【追】【求】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【篇】【篇】【圆】【合】【,】【但】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【遵】【循】【妙】【趣】【天】【成】【、】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【原】【则】【。】【只】【有】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【进】【行】【点】【题】【、】【升】【华】【,】【而】【离】【题】【、】【淡】【化】【、】【散】【化】【中】【心】【,】【却】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【请】【看】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【西】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【其】【首】【尾】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【从】【小】【学】【三】【年】【级】【开】【始】【,】【我】【就】【好】【动】【好】【跳】【,】【是】【个】【闲】【不】【住】【的】【主】【。】【别】【人】【说】【我】【得】【了】【多】【动】【症】【,】【甚】【至】【骂】【我】【父】【母】【没】【教】【养】【我】【…】【…】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【不】【清】【楚】【,】【别】【人】【(】【包】【括】【我】【的】【父】【母】【)】【越】【说】【我】【,】【越】【骂】【我】【,】【我】【就】【越】【逆】【反】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【徐】【老】【师】【点】【破】【了】【我】【的】【“】【血】【脉】【”】【,】【我】【是】【应】【试】【教】【育】【下】【的】【“】【冤】【死】【鬼】【”】【“】【牺】【牲】【品】【”】【。】【我】【以】【无】【比】【的】【热】【情】【跟】【着】【徐】【老】【师】【学】【习】【,】【父】【母】【对】【待】【我】【也】【转】【了】【1】【8】【0】【度】【的】【大】【弯】【。】【我】【对】【自】【己】【的】【行】【为】【越】【来】【越】【清】【晰】【,】【对】【自】【己】【的】【未】【来】【越】【来】【越】【有】【信】【心】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【真】【的】【是】【很】【幸】【运】【、】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【记】【写】【自】【己】【成】【长】【经】【历】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【“】【反】【对】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【歌】【颂】【素】【质】【教】【育】【”】【是】【其】【明】【确】【的】【中】【心】【思】【想】【。】【文】【章】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【记】【了】【几】【个】【自】【己】【“】【叛】【逆】【”】【的】【事】【件】【、】【场】【景】【,】【以】【衬】【托】【出】【“】【我】【”】【的】【性】【格】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【为】【徐】【老】【师】【的】【出】【场】【做】【好】【了】【铺】【垫】【。】【当】【今】【的】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【不】【知】【毁】【了】【多】【少】【“】【好】【孩】【子】【”】【,】【小】【作】【者】【以】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【的】【方】【式】【,】【揭】【示】【这】【种】【顽】【疾】【,】【这】【是】【十】【分】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【构】【思】【精】【巧】【,】【过】【渡】【自】【然】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【点】【题】【升】【华】【,】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】母狗狗的名字【<】【p】【>】【今】【年】【3】【月】【份】【的】【一】【个】【星】【期】【二】【,】【母】【亲】【煮】【了】【炸】【酱】【面】【给】【我】【们】【吃】【。】【我】【们】【吃】【得】【可】【香】【了】【,】【满】【满】【的】【佐】【料】【,】【让】【这】【碗】【面】【更】【加】【色】【香】【味】【俱】【全】【。】【可】【我】【看】【见】【母】【亲】【的】【碗】【时】【,】【目】【光】【定】【住】【了】【。】【母】【亲】【的】【碗】【里】【只】【有】【少】【得】【可】【怜】【的】【半】【碗】【面】【条】【,】【连】【我】【的】【面】【都】【比】【她】【的】【多】【好】【多】【,】【我】【再】【看】【看】【母】【亲】【碗】【里】【的】【佐】【料】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【&】【m】【d】【a】【s】【h】【;】【没】【有】【!】【我】【吃】【着】【面】【,】【心】【里】【不】【禁】【泛】【起】【一】【阵】【惭】【愧】【,】【但】【我】【没】【说】【什】【么】【,】【淡】【淡】【地】【说】【了】【句】【吃】【饱】【了】【,】【就】【默】【默】【地】【去】【上】【学】【了】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【仿】【词】【练】【句】【,】【过】【好】【语】【言】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【要】【用】【词】【造】【句】【灵】【活】【、】【准】【确】【,】【语】【句】【通】【顺】【,】【表】【意】【清】【楚】【明】【白】【,】【要】【让】【人】【家】【一】【读】【起】【来】【就】【说】【,】【嗨】【,】【这】【个】【同】【学】【的】【用】【词】【造】【句】【还】【真】【不】【赖】【啦】【,】【顺】【顺】【溜】【溜】【的】【,】【既】【读】【来】【上】【口】【,】【又】【具】【有】【表】【现】【力】【。】【可】【是】【,】【事】【实】【上】【并】【非】【如】【此】【,】【我】【们】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【语】【言】【并】【没】【有】【真】【正】【过】【关】【,】【要】【么】【句】【子】【不】【通】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【要】【么】【是】【虽】【然】【通】【顺】【但】【又】【生】【硬】【、】【枯】【燥】【。】【请】【比】【较】【阅】【读】【下】【列】【两】【个】【语】【段】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【悄】【悄】【地】【出】【现】【,】【又】【悄】【悄】【地】【隐】【去】【。】【她】【在】【我】【熟】【睡】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【张】【扬】【的】【躯】【体】【以】【温】【暖】【;】【她】【在】【我】【惆】【怅】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【迷】【惘】【的】【心】【灵】【以】【慰】【藉】【;】【她】【在】【我】【快】【乐】【时】【默】【默】【地】【与】【我】【分】【享】【;】【她】【在】【我】【悲】【伤】【时】【执】【著】【地】【选】【择】【与】【我】【同】【行】【。】【她】【的】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【鞭】【笞】【着】【我】【行】【动】【的】【张】【狂】【,】【抚】【慰】【着】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【创】【伤】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【空】【气】【漫】【天】【,】【风】【沙】【干】【燥】【的】【下】【午】【,】【来】【你】【到】【王】【府】【井】【步】【行】【街】【,】【古】【希】【奇】【怪】【的】【人】【们】【你】【身】【边】【走】【过】【,】【有】【道】【士】【、】【有】【和】【尚】【、】【有】【老】【外】【、】【有】【H】【I】【P】【青】【年】【也】【有】【板】【儿】【爷】【,】【他】【们】【走】【在】【街】【上】【,】【走】【在】【寂】【静】【,】【而】【阴】【一】【会】【排】【成】【一】【个】【字】【,】【一】【会】【排】【成】【人】【个】【字】【,】【内】【酷】【到】【家】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【段】【文】【字】【是】【一】【篇】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【母】【爱】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【生】【动】【优】【美】【的】【遣】【词】【造】【句】【,】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【妙】【用】【,】【极】【大】【地】【显】【示】【出】【母】【爱】【的】【张】【力】【、】【母】【爱】【的】【博】【大】【和】【温】【馨】【。】【第】【二】【段】【文】【字】【是】【2】【0】【0】【6】【年】【中】【考】【北】【京】【卷】【零】【分】【作】【文】【《】【北】【京】【的】【符】【号】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【你】【读】【了】【其】【语】【句】【简】【直】【不】【知】【其】【所】【云】【,】【随】【便】【乱】【用】【词】【语】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【真】【是】【让】【人】【不】【忍】【卒】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【判】【断】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【优】【劣】【,】【首】【先】【就】【能】【从】【你】【读】【的】【语】【言】【句】【子】【上】【感】【觉】【出】【来】【,】【是】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【往】【往】【是】【非】【常】【准】【确】【的】【,】【一】【读】【就】【知】【道】【你】【的】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【是】【可】【以】【习】【得】【的】【,】【这】【要】【求】【我】【们】【平】【时】【要】【坚】【持】【长】【期】【的】【、】【大】【量】【的】【阅】【读】【训】【练】【。】【只】【有】【平】【时】【大】【量】【地】【读】【人】【家】【的】【好】【文】【章】【,】【学】【习】【其】【中】【的】【优】【美】【的】【词】【句】【、】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【有】【意】【去】【模】【仿】【、】【训】【练】【,】【方】【能】【有】【所】【成】【效】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【提】【纲】【挈】【领】【,】【过】【好】【立】【意】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【审】【题】【立】【意】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【最】【重】【要】【的】【一】【步】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【不】【审】【题】【,】【也】【不】【立】【意】【,】【喜】【欢】【想】【一】【句】【写】【一】【句】【,】【就】【像】【挤】【牙】【膏】【似】【的】【,】【这】【是】【写】【不】【好】【作】【文】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【必】【须】【先】【花】【点】【时】【间】【去】【审】【题】【,】【去】【列】【提】【纲】【,】【去】【立】【意】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【磨】【刀】【不】【误】【砍】【柴】【工】【。】【但】【一】【旦】【这】【个】【步】【骤】【完】【成】【了】【,】【作】【文】【就】【能】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【,】【不】【但】【能】【确】【保】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【,】【而】【且】【还】【有】【可】【能】【更】【节】【省】【时】【间】【。】【如】【有】【篇】【《】【化】【蝶】【飞】【》】【的】【佳】【作】【是】【这】【样】【立】【意】【和】【列】【提】【纲】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【旨】【:】【在】【危】【机】【四】【伏】【中】【安】【于】【现】【状】【,】【那】【必】【定】【是】【死】【亡】【;】【只】【有】【不】【断】【地】【挑】【战】【危】【机】【,】【才】【能】【走】【向】【光】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【纲】【:】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【化】【蝶】【飞】【翔】【的】【过】【程】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【着】【重】【描】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【蜕】【化】【经】【过】【,】【蚕】【茧】【在】【蜕】【化】【过】【程】【中】【的】【心】【理】【等】【等】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【采】【用】【生】【动】【的】【描】【摹】【,】【细】【腻】【的】【刻】【画】【,】【来】【展】【现】【蚕】【茧】【的】【战】【胜】【黑】【暗】【的】【勇】【气】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【使】【之】【能】【够】【充】【分】【地】【传】【达】【出】【上】【述】【清】【晰】【的】【主】【题】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【追】【求】【委】【婉】【含】【蓄】【,】【又】【必】【须】【中】【心】【明】【确】【,】【主】【旨】【显】【豁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【中】【考】【贵】【州】【遵】【义】【一】【考】【生】【写】【的】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【可】【见】【,】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【审】【题】【、】【立】【意】【这】【一】【关】【,】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【过】【好】【拟】【题】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【考】【试】【作】【文】【,】【大】【多】【是】【材】【料】【作】【文】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【等】【,】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【拟】【题】【的】【。】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【,】【首】【先】【就】【会】【在】【拟】【题】【上】【体】【现】【出】【来】【。】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【内】【容】【的】【作】【文】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【好】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【差】【,】【最】【后】【得】【分】【会】【有】【很】【大】【的】【差】【距】【,】【这】【一】【点】【在】【本】【人】【的】【多】【次】【中】【考】【阅】【卷】【经】【历】【中】【得】【到】【了】【证】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【写】【“】【世】【间】【有】【很】【多】【规】【矩】【,】【有】【很】【多】【条】【条】【框】【框】【,】【有】【很】【多】【‘】【绳】【索】【’】【在】【束】【缚】【着】【人】【们】【,】【特】【别】【是】【束】【缚】【着】【学】【生】【”】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【我】【被】【束】【缚】【着】【》】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【半】【个】【我】【》】【,】【结】【果】【两】【文】【得】【分】【相】【差】【1】【5】【分】【之】【多】【。】【很】【明】【显】【,】【前】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【非】【常】【一】【般】【,】【而】【后】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【则】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【。】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【因】【为】【作】【者】【形】【象】【地】【揭】【示】【出】【规】【矩】【呀】【,】【条】【条】【框】【框】【呀】【,】【简】【直】【把】【有】【个】【性】【的】【“】【长】【方】【形】【”】【的】【“】【我】【”】【,】【硬】【给】【活】【生】【生】【地】【磨】【成】【了】【“】【圆】【”】【。】【成】【“】【圆】【”】【后】【的】【“】【我】【”】【不】【是】【完】【整】【的】【“】【我】【”】【了】【,】【而】【是】【只】【有】【“】【半】【个】【我】【”】【了】【。】【文】【章】【写】【来】【确】【实】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【、】【行】【文】【风】【趣】【而】【又】【启】【人】【遐】【思】【。】【再】【加】【上】【板】【块】【式】【的】【结】【构】【,】【更】【使】【得】【文】【章】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【、】【论】【说】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【才】【能】【拟】【好】【题】【呢】【?】【方】【法】【很】【多】【,】【如】【采】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【借】【用】【、】【化】【用】【、】【引】【用】【、】【设】【问】【、】【反】【问】【、】【改】【造】【等】【等】【,】【都】【是】【不】【错】【的】【方】【法】【。】【但】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【无】【论】【采】【用】【什】【么】【方】【法】【拟】【题】【,】【都】【应】【该】【是】【立】【意】【在】【先】【,】【拟】【题】【在】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【,】【过】【好】【素】【材】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【作】【文】【是】【素】【材】【堆】【砌】【而】【成】【的】【,】【这】【话】【虽】【不】【完】【全】【对】【,】【但】【还】【是】【有】【一】【定】【道】【理】【的】【,】【因】【为】【作】【文】【的】【确】【是】【离】【不】【开】【素】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【作】【文】【不】【是】【堆】【砌】【素】【材】【,】【而】【是】【择】【取】【使】【用】【素】【材】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【式】【的】【使】【用】【素】【材】【。】【平】【时】【我】【们】【要】【求】【积】【累】【大】【量】【的】【素】【材】【,】【但】【真】【正】【写】【入】【作】【文】【的】【素】【材】【(】【题】【材】【)】【,】【也】【就】【那】【么】【一】【两】【则】【而】【已】【。】【为】【了】【能】【够】【用】【上】【这】【一】【两】【则】【的】【素】【材】【,】【你】【平】【时】【就】【必】【须】【大】【量】【地】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【,】【否】【则】【,】【到】【作】【文】【时】【你】【就】【很】【难】【择】【取】【到】【恰】【当】【的】【素】【材】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【有】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【这】【也】【是】【一】【种】【承】【诺】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【福】【建】【福】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【写】【重】【获】【原】【来】【的】【生】【活】【,】【不】【能】【止】【于】【口】【头】【、】【口】【号】【,】【而】【应】【该】【落】【实】【到】【具】【体】【实】【在】【的】【行】【动】【上】【,】【这】【才】【是】【一】【种】【真】【正】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【文】【章】【的】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【十】【分】【鲜】【明】【。】【为】【了】【阐】【述】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【作】【者】【只】【择】【取】【了】【一】【个】【新】【颖】【素】【材】【:】【“】【5】【·】【1】【2】【”】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【中】【,】【背】【亡】【妻】【的】【男】【子】【吴】【家】【芳】【。】【并】【具】【体】【围】【绕】【吴】【家】【芳】【再】【婚】【的】【行】【为】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【说】【来】【有】【理】【有】【据】【,】【令】【人】【信】【服】【。】【这】【个】【素】【材】【,】【看】【似】【随】【意】【,】【但】【一】【定】【是】【作】【者】【在】【大】【量】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【的】【素】【材】【中】【择】【取】【而】【来】【的】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【的】【结】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【过】【好】【感】【情】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【无】【论】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【、】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【还】【是】【平】【时】【作】【文】【,】【都】【特】【别】【看】【重】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【写】【浪】【漫】【式】【的】【,】【写】【幻】【想】【、】【想】【象】【式】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【不】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【只】【需】【要】【天】【马】【行】【空】【即】【可】【,】【这】【绝】【对】【是】【错】【误】【的】【认】【识】【。】【不】【管】【写】【什】【么】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【都】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【是】【奇】【幻】【、】【浪】【漫】【的】【吧】【,】【但】【你】【可】【曾】【知】【道】【,】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【表】【达】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【是】【极】【其】【真】【挚】【的】【:】【生】【活】【于】【社】【会】【底】【层】【的】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【受】【了】【辱】【,】【无】【法】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【,】【于】【是】【作】【者】【就】【替】【劳】【苦】【大】【众】【想】【象】【、】【设】【计】【出】【了】【一】【个】【无】【所】【不】【能】【的】【孙】【悟】【空】【来】【为】【广】【大】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【这】【种】【情】【愫】【是】【多】【么】【的】【真】【挚】【而】【朴】【素】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【清】【楚】【,】【并】【不】【是】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【真】【人】【真】【事】【,】【才】【能】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【无】【论】【写】【什】【么】【,】【都】【必】【须】【符】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【符】【合】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【符】【合】【社】【会】【、】【自】【然】【的】【发】【展】【规】【律】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【认】【识】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【…】【…】【这】【才】【叫】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【达】【到】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【你】【就】【必】【须】【观】【察】【生】【活】【、】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【用】【心】【思】【考】【。】【在】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【现】【象】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【涂】【抹】【上】【你】【自】【己】【的】【感】【情】【色】【彩】【,】【这】【才】【能】【真】【正】【过】【好】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【过】【好】【点】【题】【升】【华】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【要】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【,】【就】【像】【一】【个】【圆】【,】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【必】【须】【圆】【合】【,】【而】【不】【能】【像】【一】【条】【直】【线】【,】【产】【生】【两】【个】【相】【反】【方】【向】【上】【的】【端】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【刻】【意】【追】【求】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【篇】【篇】【圆】【合】【,】【但】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【遵】【循】【妙】【趣】【天】【成】【、】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【原】【则】【。】【只】【有】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【进】【行】【点】【题】【、】【升】【华】【,】【而】【离】【题】【、】【淡】【化】【、】【散】【化】【中】【心】【,】【却】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【请】【看】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【西】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【其】【首】【尾】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【从】【小】【学】【三】【年】【级】【开】【始】【,】【我】【就】【好】【动】【好】【跳】【,】【是】【个】【闲】【不】【住】【的】【主】【。】【别】【人】【说】【我】【得】【了】【多】【动】【症】【,】【甚】【至】【骂】【我】【父】【母】【没】【教】【养】【我】【…】【…】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【不】【清】【楚】【,】【别】【人】【(】【包】【括】【我】【的】【父】【母】【)】【越】【说】【我】【,】【越】【骂】【我】【,】【我】【就】【越】【逆】【反】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【徐】【老】【师】【点】【破】【了】【我】【的】【“】【血】【脉】【”】【,】【我】【是】【应】【试】【教】【育】【下】【的】【“】【冤】【死】【鬼】【”】【“】【牺】【牲】【品】【”】【。】【我】【以】【无】【比】【的】【热】【情】【跟】【着】【徐】【老】【师】【学】【习】【,】【父】【母】【对】【待】【我】【也】【转】【了】【1】【8】【0】【度】【的】【大】【弯】【。】【我】【对】【自】【己】【的】【行】【为】【越】【来】【越】【清】【晰】【,】【对】【自】【己】【的】【未】【来】【越】【来】【越】【有】【信】【心】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【真】【的】【是】【很】【幸】【运】【、】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【记】【写】【自】【己】【成】【长】【经】【历】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【“】【反】【对】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【歌】【颂】【素】【质】【教】【育】【”】【是】【其】【明】【确】【的】【中】【心】【思】【想】【。】【文】【章】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【记】【了】【几】【个】【自】【己】【“】【叛】【逆】【”】【的】【事】【件】【、】【场】【景】【,】【以】【衬】【托】【出】【“】【我】【”】【的】【性】【格】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【为】【徐】【老】【师】【的】【出】【场】【做】【好】【了】【铺】【垫】【。】【当】【今】【的】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【不】【知】【毁】【了】【多】【少】【“】【好】【孩】【子】【”】【,】【小】【作】【者】【以】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【的】【方】【式】【,】【揭】【示】【这】【种】【顽】【疾】【,】【这】【是】【十】【分】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【构】【思】【精】【巧】【,】【过】【渡】【自】【然】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【点】【题】【升】【华】【,】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】母狗狗的名字【<】【p】【>】【我】【要】【仔】【细】【探】【究】【探】【究】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

母狗狗的名字:谴责暴徒破坏抗日烈士纪念园!

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【事】【篇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【从】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【到】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【耻】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【曾】【被】【人】【称】【为】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【,】【这】【个】【人】【就】【是】【阿】【扁】【。】【陈】【水】【扁】【经】【常】【自】【称】【“】【阿】【扁】【”】【以】【表】【现】【“】【亲】【民】【作】【风】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【9】【5】【1】【年】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【出】【生】【在】【台】【湾】【省】【台】【南】【县】【官】【田】【乡】【西】【庄】【村】【的】【一】【个】【三】【级】【贫】【户】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【中】【积】【欠】【的】【债】【务】【总】【是】【在】【好】【多】【年】【后】【才】【能】【还】【清】【。】【这】【段】【历】【史】【在】【台】【湾】【几】【乎】【人】【尽】【皆】【知】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【也】【因】【此】【成】【为】【许】【多】【父】【母】【教】【育】【孩】【子】【的】【楷】【模】【。】【大】【学】【毕】【业】【后】【,】【他】【又】【以】【第】【一】【名】【的】【成】【绩】【考】【取】【律】【师】【资】【格】【,】【成】【为】【当】【时】【台】【湾】【最】【年】【轻】【的】【律】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【这】【样】【,】【陈】【水】【扁】【以】【一】【个】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【的】【形】【象】【在】【台】【湾】【地】【区】【领】【导】【人】【选】【举】【中】【获】【胜】【,】【坐】【上】【了】【台】【湾】【的】【头】【把】【交】【椅】【。】【然】【而】【,】【阿】【扁】【的】【支】【持】【者】【们】【没】【有】【想】【到】【,】【这】【样】【一】【个】【“】【亲】【民】【”】【的】【人】【却】【是】【一】【个】【洗】【钱】【高】【手】【。】【大】【笔】【大】【笔】【台】【湾】【人】【民】【的】【血】【汗】【钱】【被】【扁】【家】【偷】【汇】【往】【海】【外】【。】【这】【位】【自】【诩】【的】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【子】【”】【沦】【为】【“】【台】【湾】【之】【耻】【”】【,】【并】【终】【将】【被】【扫】【进】【历】【史】【的】【垃】【圾】【堆】【,】【这】【一】【点】【,】【在】【历】【史】【和】【人】【心】【中】【却】【早】【已】【有】【了】【定】【论】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【放】【弃】【了】【名】【誉】【的】【人】【就】【等】【于】【放】【弃】【了】【生】【命】【。】【—】【—】【阿】【雷】【蒂】【诺】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【做】【人】【要】【做】【对】【社】【会】【有】【用】【的】【人】【,】【而】【能】【否】【成】【为】【有】【用】【的】【人】【就】【与】【他】【的】【成】【长】【经】【历】【有】【着】【很】【大】【关】【系】【。】【也】【许】【贫】【穷】【的】【生】【活】【可】【能】【使】【某】【个】【人】【更】【加】【看】【重】【金】【钱】【,】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【的】【思】【想】【中】【没】【有】【荣】【辱】【观】【念】【的】【话】【,】【那】【他】【就】【无】【异】【于】【行】【尸】【走】【肉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【方】【向】【,】【成】【长】【与】【荣】【辱】【,】【成】【长】【之】【路】【需】【要】【正】【确】【的】【指】【路】【牌】【,】【知】【荣】【辱】【方】【可】【健】【康】【成】【长】【,】【利】【与】【义】【,】【尊】【严】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【麻】【木】【的】【“】【拍】【客】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【1】【2】【月】【2】【9】【日】【,】【在】【福】【州】【江】【南】【公】【园】【附】【近】【的】【万】【寿】【桥】【下】【,】【一】【名】【年】【轻】【女】【子】【由】【于】【感】【情】【原】【因】【想】【投】【河】【自】【尽】【,】【于】【是】【她】【裸】【着】【身】【体】【,】【慢】【慢】【地】【走】【进】【冰】【冷】【的】【内】【河】【中】【,】【直】【至】【河】【水】【没】【过】【胸】【口】【。】【许】【多】【在】【桥】【上】【围】【观】【的】【群】【众】【不】【仅】【不】【及】【时】【施】【救】【,】【反】【而】【纷】【纷】【拿】【出】【手】【机】【争】【相】【拍】【摄】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【警】【方】【随】【后】【赶】【到】【了】【现】【场】【,】【并】【调】【来】【了】【一】【只】【捞】【垃】【圾】【的】【小】【船】【帮】【忙】【。】【在】【民】【警】【的】【耐】【心】【劝】【导】【下】【,】【水】【中】【的】【女】【子】【终】【于】【答】【应】【爬】【上】【小】【船】【。】【那】【个】【女】【子】【刚】【被】【拉】【出】【水】【面】【,】【几】【个】【年】【轻】【人】【又】【拿】【出】【手】【机】【,】【还】【喊】【着】【“】【快】【、】【快】【拍】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【鲁】【迅】【笔】【下】【有】【一】【群】【麻】【木】【的】【“】【看】【客】【”】【,】【他】【们】【促】【使】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【走】【上】【了】【弃】【医】【从】【文】【的】【道】【路】【。】【而】【今】【,】【随】【着】【社】【会】【的】【发】【展】【,】【人】【们】【已】【经】【从】【“】【看】【客】【”】【变】【为】【“】【拍】【客】【”】【,】【这】【是】【社】【会】【的】【前】【进】【还】【是】【倒】【退】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【质】【,】【精】【神】【文】【明】【,】【良】【知】【,】【麻】【木】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【江】【西】【官】【员】【北】【美】【考】【察】【1】【3】【天】【,】【惊】【人】【花】【费】【3】【5】【万】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【江】【西】【新】【余】【人】【力】【资】【源】【考】【察】【团】【共】【1】【1】【人】【赴】【北】【美】【考】【察】【学】【习】【,】【该】【团】【所】【定】【的】【出】【访】【目】【的】【原】【本】【为】【:】【一】【是】【考】【察】【人】【力】【资】【源】【和】【政】【府】【人】【事】【管】【理】【制】【度】【;】【二】【是】【参】【观】【财】【税】【公】【务】【员】【、】【劳】【动】【力】【市】【场】【培】【训】【机】【构】【;】【三】【是】【考】【察】【借】【鉴】【政】【府】【在】【扶】【持】【人】【才】【技】【能】【培】【训】【和】【新】【型】【产】【业】【优】【秀】【人】【才】【培】【养】【选】【拔】【方】【面】【的】【经】【验】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【至】【少】【从】【旅】【行】【社】【的】【文】【件】【上】【看】【,】【在】【行】【程】【中】【,】【丝】【毫】【看】【不】【到】【任】【何】【考】【察】【项】【目】【,】【而】【是】【十】【多】【天】【辗】【转】【北】【美】【十】【余】【名】【城】【的】【全】【程】【旅】【游】【安】【排】【。】【这】【些】【名】【城】【中】【还】【包】【括】【著】【名】【的】【赌】【城】【拉】【斯】【维】【加】【斯】【。】【更】【令】【人】【不】【可】【思】【议】【的】【是】【,】【考】【察】【团】【的】【这】【十】【几】【天】【的】【公】【款】【旅】【游】【花】【费】【竟】【高】【达】【3】【5】【万】【元】【人】【民】【币】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【纳】【税】【人】【的】【钱】【交】【给】【国】【家】【,】【其】【目】【的】【是】【想】【让】【国】【家】【统】【筹】【安】【排】【,】【促】【使】【国】【家】【各】【项】【事】【业】【健】【康】【顺】【利】【发】【展】【。】【然】【而】【,】【一】【些】【父】【母】【官】【还】【是】【无】【视】【民】【众】【的】【血】【汗】【而】【将】【公】【款】【肆】【意】【挥】【霍】【,】【这】【既】【是】【一】【个】【道】【德】【问】【题】【,】【又】【是】【一】【个】【政】【治】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【职】【责】【,】【道】【德】【,】【勤】【俭】【节】【约】【,】【传】【统】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【 】【“】【几】【家】【欢】【乐】【几】【家】【愁】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【河】【南】【省】【洛】【阳】【市】【西】【南】【环】【高】【速】【公】【路】【发】【生】【了】【一】【起】【车】【辆】【连】【环】【相】【撞】【事】【故】【,】【共】【造】【成】【3】【死】【2】【重】【伤】【,】【以】【及】【5】【人】【轻】【伤】【和】【2】【0】【多】【辆】【机】【动】【车】【报】【废】【或】【受】【损】【。】【几】【位】【乘】【客】【在】【高】【速】【公】【路】【车】【祸】【事】【故】【现】【场】【附】【近】【打】【扑】【克】【,】【等】【待】【事】【故】【处】【理】【完】【毕】【道】【路】【疏】【通】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【事】【件】【的】【看】【点】【不】【在】【于】【交】【通】【事】【故】【导】【致】【2】【0】【多】【辆】【机】【动】【车】【报】【废】【或】【受】【损】【,】【也】【不】【在】【于】【事】【故】【中】【死】【伤】【人】【数】【的】【多】【少】【,】【而】【在】【于】【这】【场】【血】【腥】【交】【通】【事】【故】【旁】【的】【那】【张】【牌】【桌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【苛】【求】【每】【一】【个】【乘】【客】【都】【能】【参】【加】【救】【援】【,】【因】【为】【交】【通】【事】【故】【的】【救】【援】【很】【有】【专】【业】【性】【和】【技】【术】【性】【;】【我】【们】【也】【不】【要】【求】【每】【一】【个】【乘】【客】【都】【要】【为】【交】【通】【事】【故】【的】【遇】【难】【者】【落】【泪】【,】【因】【为】【不】【幸】【者】【与】【他】【们】【可】【能】【不】【沾】【亲】【带】【故】【。】【但】【是】【,】【最】【起】【码】【的】【道】【德】【准】【则】【是】【,】【你】【不】【能】【在】【别】【人】【死】【难】【的】【地】【方】【娱】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【其】【实】【,】【中】【国】【人】【就】【喜】【欢】【充】【当】【血】【腥】【场】【面】【旁】【的】【看】【客】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【他】【的】【好】【多】【作】【品】【中】【都】【对】【中】【国】【的】【看】【客】【做】【过】【刻】【画】【。】【然】【而】【在】【今】【天】【,】【中】【国】【的】【看】【客】【似】【乎】【有】【增】【无】【减】【。】【这】【也】【足】【以】【说】【明】【有】【不】【少】【人】【的】【“】【良】【知】【”】【、】【“】【道】【德】【”】【在】【沦】【丧】【。】【这】【是】【一】【个】【值】【得】【深】【思】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【情】【心】【,】【荣】【与】【辱】【,】【换】【位】【思】【考】【,】【热】【情】【与】【冷】【漠】【,】【参】【与】【,】【道】【德】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【历】【史】【篇】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【辫】【子】【教】【授】【—】【—】【狂】【儒】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【何】【许】【人】【也】【?】【他】【生】【在】【南】【洋】【,】【学】【在】【西】【洋】【,】【婚】【在】【东】【洋】【,】【仕】【在】【北】【洋】【。】【精】【通】【英】【、】【法】【、】【德】【、】【拉】【丁】【、】【希】【腊】【、】【马】【来】【亚】【等】【9】【种】【语】【言】【,】【获】【1】【3】【个】【博】【士】【学】【位】【,】【倒】【读】【英】【文】【报】【纸】【嘲】【笑】【英】【国】【人】【,】【说】【美】【国】【人】【没】【有】【文】【化】【,】【第】【一】【个】【将】【中】【国】【的】【《】【论】【语】【》】【、】【《】【中】【庸】【》】【用】【英】【文】【和】【德】【文】【翻】【译】【到】【西】【方】【。】【凭】【三】【寸】【不】【烂】【之】【舌】【,】【向】【日】【本】【首】【相】【伊】【藤】【博】【文】【大】【讲】【孔】【学】【,】【与】【文】【学】【大】【师】【列】【夫】【·】【托】【尔】【斯】【泰】【书】【信】【来】【往】【,】【讨】【论】【世】【界】【文】【化】【和】【政】【坛】【局】【势】【,】【被】【印】【度】【圣】【雄】【甘】【地】【称】【为】【“】【最】【尊】【贵】【的】【中】【国】【人】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【也】【被】【称】【为】【“】【文】【坛】【怪】【杰】【”】【,】【由】【于】【博】【学】【多】【才】【,】【被】【聘】【为】【北】【京】【大】【学】【的】【教】【授】【。】【他】【在】【北】【大】【期】【间】【,】【正】【好】【赶】【上】【了】【新】【文】【化】【运】【动】【,】【一】【向】【以】【“】【大】【儒】【”】【自】【居】【的】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【却】【极】【力】【反】【对】【新】【文】【化】【运】【动】【,】【他】【在】【北】【京】【大】【学】【任】【教】【,】【梳】【着】【小】【辫】【走】【进】【课】【堂】【,】【经】【常】【引】【来】【学】【生】【们】【的】【一】【片】【哄】【堂】【大】【笑】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【他】【的】【日】【常】【打】【扮】【也】【格】【外】【特】【殊】【,】【戴】【着】【瓜】【皮】【小】【帽】【,】【身】【着】【长】【袍】【马】【褂】【。】【在】【个】【人】【主】【张】【上】【,】【他】【甚】【至】【为】【纳】【妾】【、】【裹】【小】【脚】【辩】【护】【。】【并】【可】【笑】【地】【以】【每】【个】【茶】【壶】【配】【四】【个】【茶】【碗】【来】【比】【喻】【一】【个】【男】【子】【纳】【多】【个】【小】【妾】【的】【合】【理】【性】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【北】【大】【“】【兼】【容】【并】【包】【”】【的】【教】【育】【方】【针】【让】【教】【育】【思】【想】【百】【家】【争】【鸣】【。】【这】【也】【使】【得】【辜】【鸿】【铭】【成】【为】【一】【道】【引】【人】【注】【目】【的】【校】【园】【风】【景】【。】【从】【他】【身】【上】【,】【我】【们】【看】【到】【了】【真】【正】【的】【保】【守】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【,】【解】【放】【思】【想】【,】【坚】【定】【,】【个】【性】【,】【思】【想】【的】【留】【守】【,】【忠】【诚】【,】【包】【容】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【口】【蜜】【腹】【剑】【的】【李】【林】【甫】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【玄】【宗】【的】【兵】【部】【尚】【书】【李】【林】【甫】【,】【论】【才】【艺】【,】【也】【还】【不】【错】【,】【一】【手】【字】【、】【画】【都】【很】【好】【;】【但】【他】【做】【官】【却】【不】【正】【正】【诚】【诚】【地】【办】【事】【,】【而】【是】【一】【味】【迁】【就】【和】【迎】【合】【玄】【宗】【的】【意】【旨】【。】【因】【此】【,】【他】【很】【得】【玄】【宗】【的】【宠】【信】【,】【一】【直】【在】【朝】【中】【做】【了】【1】【9】【年】【的】【官】【。】【李】【林】【甫】【和】【一】【般】【人】【接】【触】【,】【也】【总】【是】【在】【外】【表】【上】【表】【现】【出】【和】【人】【很】【友】【好】【,】【非】【常】【合】【作】【,】【嘴】【里】【说】【尽】【所】【有】【可】【以】【说】【的】【好】【听】【的】【、】【善】【意】【的】【话】【。】【可】【是】【实】【际】【上】【,】【他】【的】【性】【情】【和】【他】【的】【表】【面】【态】【度】【完】【全】【相】【反】【:】【他】【竟】【是】【一】【个】【非】【常】【狡】【猾】【阴】【险】【、】【常】【常】【使】【坏】【主】【意】【来】【害】【人】【的】【人】【。】【坏】【人】【虽】【然】【有】【时】【可】【以】【达】【到】【害】【人】【的】【目】【的】【,】【逞】【奸】【谋】【于】【一】【时】【,】【但】【是】【,】【日】【子】【久】【了】【,】【人】【家】【就】【发】【现】【了】【他】【这】【种】【伪】【善】【,】【于】【是】【大】【家】【便】【在】【背】【地】【里】【说】【他】【“】【口】【有】【蜜】【、】【腹】【有】【剑】【”】【,】【即】【:】【口】【上】【甜】【甜】【蜜】【蜜】【,】【心】【中】【利】【剑】【害】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【俗】【话】【说】【,】【“】【笑】【里】【藏】【刀】【”】【。】【这】【种】【表】【里】【不】【一】【的】【人】【是】【最】【危】【险】【的】【,】【常】【常】【令】【人】【防】【不】【胜】【防】【。】【换】【个】【角】【度】【,】【在】【大】【众】【看】【来】【,】【这】【种】【表】【里】【不】【一】【的】【人】【往】【往】【也】【是】【没】【有】【好】【下】【场】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【适】【用】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【内】【与】【外】【,】【诚】【实】【与】【虚】【伪】【,】【表】【里】【如】【一】【,】【防】【备】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【 】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【的】【错】【误】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【德】【裔】【美】【国】【科】【学】【家】【阿】【尔】【伯】【特】【·】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【,】【是】【现】【代】【物】【理】【学】【的】【开】【创】【者】【和】【奠】【基】【人】【,】【赢】【得】【世】【人】【无】【尽】【的】【赞】【誉】【,】【是】【一】【位】【举】【世】【公】【认】【的】【“】【天】【才】【”】【。】【不】【过】【,】【在】【他】【的】【一】【生】【中】【,】【并】【非】【什】【么】【都】【完】【美】【无】【缺】【,】【也】【不】【是】【无】【论】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【、】【在】【什】【么】【问】【题】【上】【都】【完】【全】【正】【确】【,】【更】【没】【有】【人】【敢】【说】【包】【括】【他】【的】【相】【对】【论】【在】【内】【的】【所】【有】【理】【论】【在】【人】【类】【的】【历】【史】【上】【就】【是】【绝】【对】【真】【理】【。】【其】【实】【,】【他】【曾】【犯】【下】【许】【多】【错】【误】【。】【作】【家】【汉】【斯】【·】【奥】【哈】【尼】【亚】【在】【一】【本】【名】【为】【《】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【的】【错】【误】【:】【天】【才】【的】【人】【性】【弱】【点】【》】【的】【书】【中】【,】【列】【举】【了】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【在】【科】【学】【探】【索】【过】【程】【中】【犯】【下】【的】【一】【系】【列】【错】【误】【,】【其】【中】【,】【较】【为】【重】【大】【的】【错】【误】【有】【2】【3】【个】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【错】【误】【仅】【是】【爱】【因】【斯】【坦】【在】【科】【学】【探】【索】【中】【所】【犯】【错】【误】【中】【较】【为】【重】【大】【的】【几】【条】【,】【其】【实】【,】【他】【所】【犯】【的】【错】【误】【比】【这】【还】【不】【知】【要】【多】【多】【少】【倍】【。】【他】【的】【错】【误】【,】【无】【论】【在】【数】【量】【上】【还】【是】【影】【响】【上】【都】【不】【可】【小】【视】【。】【正】【是】【这】【些】【错】【误】【,】【在】【不】【同】【阶】【段】【、】【不】【同】【层】【面】【、】【不】【同】【问】【题】【上】【暴】【露】【出】【了】【“】【天】【才】【科】【学】【家】【”】【的】【人】【性】【弱】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【分】【析】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【无】【论】【多】【么】【伟】【大】【的】【科】【学】【家】【也】【会】【犯】【错】【,】【原】【因】【很】【简】【单】【,】【科】【学】【家】【也】【是】【人】【。】【反】【之】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【人】【永】【远】【不】【犯】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【我】【们】【也】【只】【能】【以】【“】【神】【”】【来】【称】【呼】【他】【,】【而】【事】【实】【上】【,】【“】【神】【”】【是】【不】【存】【在】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【反】【向】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【才】【的】【弱】【点】【,】【完】【美】【,】【错】【误】【,】【真】【实】【,】【成】【长】【<】【b】【r】【>】母狗狗的名字【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【仿】【词】【练】【句】【,】【过】【好】【语】【言】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【第】【一】【步】【就】【是】【要】【用】【词】【造】【句】【灵】【活】【、】【准】【确】【,】【语】【句】【通】【顺】【,】【表】【意】【清】【楚】【明】【白】【,】【要】【让】【人】【家】【一】【读】【起】【来】【就】【说】【,】【嗨】【,】【这】【个】【同】【学】【的】【用】【词】【造】【句】【还】【真】【不】【赖】【啦】【,】【顺】【顺】【溜】【溜】【的】【,】【既】【读】【来】【上】【口】【,】【又】【具】【有】【表】【现】【力】【。】【可】【是】【,】【事】【实】【上】【并】【非】【如】【此】【,】【我】【们】【绝】【大】【多】【数】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【时】【,】【语】【言】【并】【没】【有】【真】【正】【过】【关】【,】【要】【么】【句】【子】【不】【通】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【要】【么】【是】【虽】【然】【通】【顺】【但】【又】【生】【硬】【、】【枯】【燥】【。】【请】【比】【较】【阅】【读】【下】【列】【两】【个】【语】【段】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【悄】【悄】【地】【出】【现】【,】【又】【悄】【悄】【地】【隐】【去】【。】【她】【在】【我】【熟】【睡】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【张】【扬】【的】【躯】【体】【以】【温】【暖】【;】【她】【在】【我】【惆】【怅】【的】【时】【候】【给】【我】【迷】【惘】【的】【心】【灵】【以】【慰】【藉】【;】【她】【在】【我】【快】【乐】【时】【默】【默】【地】【与】【我】【分】【享】【;】【她】【在】【我】【悲】【伤】【时】【执】【著】【地】【选】【择】【与】【我】【同】【行】【。】【她】【的】【无】【微】【不】【至】【,】【鞭】【笞】【着】【我】【行】【动】【的】【张】【狂】【,】【抚】【慰】【着】【我】【心】【灵】【的】【创】【伤】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【空】【气】【漫】【天】【,】【风】【沙】【干】【燥】【的】【下】【午】【,】【来】【你】【到】【王】【府】【井】【步】【行】【街】【,】【古】【希】【奇】【怪】【的】【人】【们】【你】【身】【边】【走】【过】【,】【有】【道】【士】【、】【有】【和】【尚】【、】【有】【老】【外】【、】【有】【H】【I】【P】【青】【年】【也】【有】【板】【儿】【爷】【,】【他】【们】【走】【在】【街】【上】【,】【走】【在】【寂】【静】【,】【而】【阴】【一】【会】【排】【成】【一】【个】【字】【,】【一】【会】【排】【成】【人】【个】【字】【,】【内】【酷】【到】【家】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【段】【文】【字】【是】【一】【篇】【中】【考】【佳】【作】【《】【母】【爱】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【生】【动】【优】【美】【的】【遣】【词】【造】【句】【,】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【修】【辞】【妙】【用】【,】【极】【大】【地】【显】【示】【出】【母】【爱】【的】【张】【力】【、】【母】【爱】【的】【博】【大】【和】【温】【馨】【。】【第】【二】【段】【文】【字】【是】【2】【0】【0】【6】【年】【中】【考】【北】【京】【卷】【零】【分】【作】【文】【《】【北】【京】【的】【符】【号】【》】【中】【的】【语】【句】【。】【你】【读】【了】【其】【语】【句】【简】【直】【不】【知】【其】【所】【云】【,】【随】【便】【乱】【用】【词】【语】【,】【前】【言】【不】【搭】【后】【语】【,】【真】【是】【让】【人】【不】【忍】【卒】【读】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【判】【断】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【优】【劣】【,】【首】【先】【就】【能】【从】【你】【读】【的】【语】【言】【句】【子】【上】【感】【觉】【出】【来】【,】【是】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【第】【一】【感】【觉】【往】【往】【是】【非】【常】【准】【确】【的】【,】【一】【读】【就】【知】【道】【你】【的】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【是】【可】【以】【习】【得】【的】【,】【这】【要】【求】【我】【们】【平】【时】【要】【坚】【持】【长】【期】【的】【、】【大】【量】【的】【阅】【读】【训】【练】【。】【只】【有】【平】【时】【大】【量】【地】【读】【人】【家】【的】【好】【文】【章】【,】【学】【习】【其】【中】【的】【优】【美】【的】【词】【句】【、】【优】【美】【的】【语】【言】【,】【有】【意】【去】【模】【仿】【、】【训】【练】【,】【方】【能】【有】【所】【成】【效】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【提】【纲】【挈】【领】【,】【过】【好】【立】【意】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【审】【题】【立】【意】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【最】【重】【要】【的】【一】【步】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【写】【作】【文】【不】【审】【题】【,】【也】【不】【立】【意】【,】【喜】【欢】【想】【一】【句】【写】【一】【句】【,】【就】【像】【挤】【牙】【膏】【似】【的】【,】【这】【是】【写】【不】【好】【作】【文】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【必】【须】【先】【花】【点】【时】【间】【去】【审】【题】【,】【去】【列】【提】【纲】【,】【去】【立】【意】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【得】【好】【,】【磨】【刀】【不】【误】【砍】【柴】【工】【。】【但】【一】【旦】【这】【个】【步】【骤】【完】【成】【了】【,】【作】【文】【就】【能】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【,】【不】【但】【能】【确】【保】【主】【旨】【明】【确】【,】【而】【且】【还】【有】【可】【能】【更】【节】【省】【时】【间】【。】【如】【有】【篇】【《】【化】【蝶】【飞】【》】【的】【佳】【作】【是】【这】【样】【立】【意】【和】【列】【提】【纲】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【旨】【:】【在】【危】【机】【四】【伏】【中】【安】【于】【现】【状】【,】【那】【必】【定】【是】【死】【亡】【;】【只】【有】【不】【断】【地】【挑】【战】【危】【机】【,】【才】【能】【走】【向】【光】【明】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【纲】【:】【用】【拟】【人】【的】【手】【法】【,】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【化】【蝶】【飞】【翔】【的】【过】【程】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【着】【重】【描】【写】【蚕】【茧】【的】【蜕】【化】【经】【过】【,】【蚕】【茧】【在】【蜕】【化】【过】【程】【中】【的】【心】【理】【等】【等】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【采】【用】【生】【动】【的】【描】【摹】【,】【细】【腻】【的】【刻】【画】【,】【来】【展】【现】【蚕】【茧】【的】【战】【胜】【黑】【暗】【的】【勇】【气】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【使】【之】【能】【够】【充】【分】【地】【传】【达】【出】【上】【述】【清】【晰】【的】【主】【题】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【追】【求】【委】【婉】【含】【蓄】【,】【又】【必】【须】【中】【心】【明】【确】【,】【主】【旨】【显】【豁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【中】【考】【贵】【州】【遵】【义】【一】【考】【生】【写】【的】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【可】【见】【,】【写】【好】【作】【文】【,】【审】【题】【、】【立】【意】【这】【一】【关】【,】【是】【不】【能】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【,】【过】【好】【拟】【题】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【考】【试】【作】【文】【,】【大】【多】【是】【材】【料】【作】【文】【、】【话】【题】【作】【文】【等】【,】【是】【需】【要】【我】【们】【自】【己】【拟】【题】【的】【。】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【的】【好】【坏】【,】【首】【先】【就】【会】【在】【拟】【题】【上】【体】【现】【出】【来】【。】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【内】【容】【的】【作】【文】【,】【如】【果】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【好】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【差】【,】【最】【后】【得】【分】【会】【有】【很】【大】【的】【差】【距】【,】【这】【一】【点】【在】【本】【人】【的】【多】【次】【中】【考】【阅】【卷】【经】【历】【中】【得】【到】【了】【证】【实】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【同】【样】【一】【篇】【写】【“】【世】【间】【有】【很】【多】【规】【矩】【,】【有】【很】【多】【条】【条】【框】【框】【,】【有】【很】【多】【‘】【绳】【索】【’】【在】【束】【缚】【着】【人】【们】【,】【特】【别】【是】【束】【缚】【着】【学】【生】【”】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【我】【被】【束】【缚】【着】【》】【,】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【为】【《】【半】【个】【我】【》】【,】【结】【果】【两】【文】【得】【分】【相】【差】【1】【5】【分】【之】【多】【。】【很】【明】【显】【,】【前】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【非】【常】【一】【般】【,】【而】【后】【一】【个】【拟】【题】【则】【新】【颖】【别】【致】【。】【为】【什】【么】【呢】【?】【因】【为】【作】【者】【形】【象】【地】【揭】【示】【出】【规】【矩】【呀】【,】【条】【条】【框】【框】【呀】【,】【简】【直】【把】【有】【个】【性】【的】【“】【长】【方】【形】【”】【的】【“】【我】【”】【,】【硬】【给】【活】【生】【生】【地】【磨】【成】【了】【“】【圆】【”】【。】【成】【“】【圆】【”】【后】【的】【“】【我】【”】【不】【是】【完】【整】【的】【“】【我】【”】【了】【,】【而】【是】【只】【有】【“】【半】【个】【我】【”】【了】【。】【文】【章】【写】【来】【确】【实】【构】【思】【新】【颖】【、】【行】【文】【风】【趣】【而】【又】【启】【人】【遐】【思】【。】【再】【加】【上】【板】【块】【式】【的】【结】【构】【,】【更】【使】【得】【文】【章】【层】【次】【清】【楚】【、】【论】【说】【有】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【何】【才】【能】【拟】【好】【题】【呢】【?】【方】【法】【很】【多】【,】【如】【采】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【、】【借】【用】【、】【化】【用】【、】【引】【用】【、】【设】【问】【、】【反】【问】【、】【改】【造】【等】【等】【,】【都】【是】【不】【错】【的】【方】【法】【。】【但】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【无】【论】【采】【用】【什】【么】【方】【法】【拟】【题】【,】【都】【应】【该】【是】【立】【意】【在】【先】【,】【拟】【题】【在】【后】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【,】【过】【好】【素】【材】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【作】【文】【是】【素】【材】【堆】【砌】【而】【成】【的】【,】【这】【话】【虽】【不】【完】【全】【对】【,】【但】【还】【是】【有】【一】【定】【道】【理】【的】【,】【因】【为】【作】【文】【的】【确】【是】【离】【不】【开】【素】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【作】【文】【不】【是】【堆】【砌】【素】【材】【,】【而】【是】【择】【取】【使】【用】【素】【材】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【式】【的】【使】【用】【素】【材】【。】【平】【时】【我】【们】【要】【求】【积】【累】【大】【量】【的】【素】【材】【,】【但】【真】【正】【写】【入】【作】【文】【的】【素】【材】【(】【题】【材】【)】【,】【也】【就】【那】【么】【一】【两】【则】【而】【已】【。】【为】【了】【能】【够】【用】【上】【这】【一】【两】【则】【的】【素】【材】【,】【你】【平】【时】【就】【必】【须】【大】【量】【地】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【,】【否】【则】【,】【到】【作】【文】【时】【你】【就】【很】【难】【择】【取】【到】【恰】【当】【的】【素】【材】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【比】【如】【,】【有】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【这】【也】【是】【一】【种】【承】【诺】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【福】【建】【福】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【写】【重】【获】【原】【来】【的】【生】【活】【,】【不】【能】【止】【于】【口】【头】【、】【口】【号】【,】【而】【应】【该】【落】【实】【到】【具】【体】【实】【在】【的】【行】【动】【上】【,】【这】【才】【是】【一】【种】【真】【正】【的】【承】【诺】【。】【文】【章】【的】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【十】【分】【鲜】【明】【。】【为】【了】【阐】【述】【这】【种】【观】【点】【,】【作】【者】【只】【择】【取】【了】【一】【个】【新】【颖】【素】【材】【:】【“】【5】【·】【1】【2】【”】【汶】【川】【大】【地】【震】【中】【,】【背】【亡】【妻】【的】【男】【子】【吴】【家】【芳】【。】【并】【具】【体】【围】【绕】【吴】【家】【芳】【再】【婚】【的】【行】【为】【展】【开】【论】【述】【,】【说】【来】【有】【理】【有】【据】【,】【令】【人】【信】【服】【。】【这】【个】【素】【材】【,】【看】【似】【随】【意】【,】【但】【一】【定】【是】【作】【者】【在】【大】【量】【积】【累】【、】【准】【备】【的】【素】【材】【中】【择】【取】【而】【来】【的】【,】【是】【披】【沙】【拣】【金】【的】【结】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【情】【真】【意】【切】【,】【过】【好】【感】【情】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【现】【在】【,】【无】【论】【是】【中】【考】【作】【文】【、】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【还】【是】【平】【时】【作】【文】【,】【都】【特】【别】【看】【重】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【人】【说】【,】【写】【浪】【漫】【式】【的】【,】【写】【幻】【想】【、】【想】【象】【式】【的】【作】【文】【,】【就】【不】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【只】【需】【要】【天】【马】【行】【空】【即】【可】【,】【这】【绝】【对】【是】【错】【误】【的】【认】【识】【。】【不】【管】【写】【什】【么】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【都】【需】【要】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【是】【奇】【幻】【、】【浪】【漫】【的】【吧】【,】【但】【你】【可】【曾】【知】【道】【,】【《】【西】【游】【记】【》】【表】【达】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【是】【极】【其】【真】【挚】【的】【:】【生】【活】【于】【社】【会】【底】【层】【的】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【受】【了】【辱】【,】【无】【法】【报】【仇】【雪】【恨】【,】【于】【是】【作】【者】【就】【替】【劳】【苦】【大】【众】【想】【象】【、】【设】【计】【出】【了】【一】【个】【无】【所】【不】【能】【的】【孙】【悟】【空】【来】【为】【广】【大】【劳】【动】【人】【民】【打】【抱】【不】【平】【。】【这】【种】【情】【愫】【是】【多】【么】【的】【真】【挚】【而】【朴】【素】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【清】【楚】【,】【并】【不】【是】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【真】【人】【真】【事】【,】【才】【能】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【无】【论】【写】【什】【么】【,】【都】【必】【须】【符】【合】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【符】【合】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【符】【合】【社】【会】【、】【自】【然】【的】【发】【展】【规】【律】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【认】【识】【,】【符】【合】【人】【们】【的】【思】【想】【感】【情】【…】【…】【这】【才】【叫】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【要】【达】【到】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【,】【你】【就】【必】【须】【观】【察】【生】【活】【、】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【用】【心】【思】【考】【。】【在】【写】【生】【活】【中】【的】【现】【象】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【涂】【抹】【上】【你】【自】【己】【的】【感】【情】【色】【彩】【,】【这】【才】【能】【真】【正】【过】【好】【感】【情】【真】【挚】【关】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【六】【、】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【过】【好】【点】【题】【升】【华】【关】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【要】【自】【圆】【其】【说】【,】【就】【像】【一】【个】【圆】【,】【开】【头】【和】【结】【尾】【必】【须】【圆】【合】【,】【而】【不】【能】【像】【一】【条】【直】【线】【,】【产】【生】【两】【个】【相】【反】【方】【向】【上】【的】【端】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【不】【刻】【意】【追】【求】【首】【尾】【圆】【合】【,】【篇】【篇】【圆】【合】【,】【但】【我】【们】【一】【定】【要】【遵】【循】【妙】【趣】【天】【成】【、】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【原】【则】【。】【只】【有】【自】【然】【圆】【合】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【更】【好】【地】【进】【行】【点】【题】【、】【升】【华】【,】【而】【离】【题】【、】【淡】【化】【、】【散】【化】【中】【心】【,】【却】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【请】【看】【一】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【》】【(】【2】【0】【0】【9】【年】【江】【西】【一】【考】【生】【)】【,】【其】【首】【尾】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【应】【该】【说】【,】【从】【小】【学】【三】【年】【级】【开】【始】【,】【我】【就】【好】【动】【好】【跳】【,】【是】【个】【闲】【不】【住】【的】【主】【。】【别】【人】【说】【我】【得】【了】【多】【动】【症】【,】【甚】【至】【骂】【我】【父】【母】【没】【教】【养】【我】【…】【…】【不】【知】【为】【什】【么】【,】【我】【自】【己】【也】【不】【清】【楚】【,】【别】【人】【(】【包】【括】【我】【的】【父】【母】【)】【越】【说】【我】【,】【越】【骂】【我】【,】【我】【就】【越】【逆】【反】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【徐】【老】【师】【点】【破】【了】【我】【的】【“】【血】【脉】【”】【,】【我】【是】【应】【试】【教】【育】【下】【的】【“】【冤】【死】【鬼】【”】【“】【牺】【牲】【品】【”】【。】【我】【以】【无】【比】【的】【热】【情】【跟】【着】【徐】【老】【师】【学】【习】【,】【父】【母】【对】【待】【我】【也】【转】【了】【1】【8】【0】【度】【的】【大】【弯】【。】【我】【对】【自】【己】【的】【行】【为】【越】【来】【越】【清】【晰】【,】【对】【自】【己】【的】【未】【来】【越】【来】【越】【有】【信】【心】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【遇】【到】【了】【这】【样】【的】【好】【老】【师】【,】【我】【真】【的】【是】【很】【幸】【运】【、】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【记】【写】【自】【己】【成】【长】【经】【历】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【。】【“】【反】【对】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【歌】【颂】【素】【质】【教】【育】【”】【是】【其】【明】【确】【的】【中】【心】【思】【想】【。】【文】【章】【以】【“】【我】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【记】【了】【几】【个】【自】【己】【“】【叛】【逆】【”】【的】【事】【件】【、】【场】【景】【,】【以】【衬】【托】【出】【“】【我】【”】【的】【性】【格】【,】【同】【时】【,】【也】【为】【徐】【老】【师】【的】【出】【场】【做】【好】【了】【铺】【垫】【。】【当】【今】【的】【应】【试】【教】【育】【,】【不】【知】【毁】【了】【多】【少】【“】【好】【孩】【子】【”】【,】【小】【作】【者】【以】【大】【声】【疾】【呼】【的】【方】【式】【,】【揭】【示】【这】【种】【顽】【疾】【,】【这】【是】【十】【分】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【构】【思】【精】【巧】【,】【过】【渡】【自】【然】【,】【首】【尾】【呼】【应】【,】【点】【题】【升】【华】【,】【水】【到】【渠】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【p】【>】【如】【果】【我】【能】【多】【去】【看】【看】【这】【位】【老】【人】【,】【她】【也】【许】【在】【最】【后】【那】【段】【时】【间】【,】【就】【不】【会】【有】【太】【多】【孤】【寂】【与】【惆】【怅】【,】【如】【果】【我】【读】【书】【用】【功】【些】【,】【就】【不】【用】【报】【太】【多】【课】【外】【班】【,】【也】【许】【就】【有】【多】【些】【时】【间】【陪】【小】【奶】【奶】【了】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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